this is what i've come up with so far everyone not much but i believe it's a good start to a new and epic world of fantasy that is unraveling in my head

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            The sun dawns in the east as the mists of Lake Vealas begin their slow journey towards

the sun.  At this time Far along  the north-eastern ridge of the continent of Gedrid, deep

within an underground tower is a man siting on a throne with long streaming silver hair and dark

green eyes lined with cyan on the outer tip of the pupils. He whispers words no one can hear.  All

of a sudden there is a loud crack and a large demon appears hulking in a fetal position.  "Demnoch" the man speaks and as if aroused by the word alone the demon stretches out, towering over the large throne the man sits on, the demon lets out a long yawn and stretches his arms which easily covers more then double the length of the man if he were standing sideways.  "It has been a long time since i have been to the Physical plane, who are you to have brought me here so easily without me breaking your will."  The man stares at the demon intently for a few moments then blinks twice

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